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He took her picture, tucking it away
in a grimy drawer. Small spiders slept
as their delicate abodes sighed and swayed.
Blissfully into the room, morning crept
upon his neck. Kissing his eyes this blight
forsake his heart. Strangely it seemed so dark
this menacing, this brilliantly warm light.
"Perhaps to the window you should embark"
whispered the voice buried deep in his thoughts.
Up, into the final room it had said
"Go now, as the light comes. These tiresome knots
surely shall unravel once you are dead."
There are some who heed this fluttering voice
unaware that there is always a choice.
in a grimy drawer. Small spiders slept
as their delicate abodes sighed and swayed.
Blissfully into the room, morning crept
upon his neck. Kissing his eyes this blight
forsake his heart. Strangely it seemed so dark
this menacing, this brilliantly warm light.
"Perhaps to the window you should embark"
whispered the voice buried deep in his thoughts.
Up, into the final room it had said
"Go now, as the light comes. These tiresome knots
surely shall unravel once you are dead."
There are some who heed this fluttering voice
unaware that there is always a choice.
English sonnet this time. I'm trying not to be so depressing, really xD But my inspiration seems to come when I brood and just seethe with cynicism and despair haha xD All comments and criticisms welcome~
Here is the 'traditional rhyming scheme':
ABABCDCDEFEFGG
Still have absolutely no clue about meter
Here is the 'traditional rhyming scheme':
ABABCDCDEFEFGG
Still have absolutely no clue about meter
© 2008 - 2024 Yuri-Nikko
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sonnets have 10 syllabols per line... yeah pain in the ass.