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Beyond Eternity by *Yuri-Nikko:iconYuri-Nikko:



Inside a hidden grove there sits a place
where lives a lady of distinguished grace.
Her hair is amber and dark like new soil
garbed in robes of blue, she is refined. Royal.
Lazy digits fidget with drapes of lace
and wait for his touch. But there is no trace
of kisses exchanged in such great haste.
In such great haste.

In air as still as that of The Great Tomb*
she glided to him from across the room.
His smile was pained. Her eyes refused to see
that he and she were never meant to be.
A tall weathered clock chimes in candled gloom
to warn him their time would end much too soon.
From down the hall there drifts a mournful tune.
A mournful tune.

In mornings wake she chases fleeting dreams.
as reality loosens at its seams.
All dark corners of her room start to tare
and she can hear his footfalls on the stairs.
which creak. At once her vision writhes and teems
with fantastic greens and purple which leans
onto her eyelids. And it's him it seems.
It's him it seems.

Inside a hidden grove sits a worn place
where lived a lady of distinguished grace.
Her lover came and took her far away
beyond the eyes of rotting and decay.
There they revel in each others' embrace
still bonded to love beyond time and space.
A love that even death cannot erase.
Cannot erase.


*Ref: The tomb of Jesus.
©2008 *Yuri-Nikko
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A poem I have to turn in for class =x I should have shown it to you guys earlier but I just got it refined now xD I seem to do dark poetry ^^; This is an octave stanza poem (AABBAAAA, ottava rima) in the style I borrowed from Edwin Arlington Robinson's Luke Havergal (it was the only example in our reader xD). I liked the sound of it, so I wanted to make my own =] Enjoy!

I have no idea why I decided to put a slight religious slant with the tomb :shrug: It seems to work with the ending =] I'll let you smart people figure it out xD
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~penguinofthetalon:iconpenguinofthetalon: Mar 19, 2008, 11:41:37 PM
nice :D

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~ReikaiRose61:iconReikaiRose61: Mar 20, 2008, 9:18:18 AM
Pretty poem. :D Good luck handing it in!

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~caffine-woman:iconcaffine-woman: Mar 20, 2008, 10:20:55 AM
Awesome. That sounded nice and dark :O_o:... I like it. :D

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*Yuri-Nikko:iconYuri-Nikko: Mar 21, 2008, 8:56:40 PM
Thanks! I just hope it's good enough to my prof ^^;

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:floating: 今度は僕が君に羽をあげよう…
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~ReikaiRose61:iconReikaiRose61: Mar 22, 2008, 7:47:32 AM
Haha I'm sure it is. :D Though, personally, I'm not one for the religious reference [sorry I'm now agnostic], but it's at least ambiguous enough to be taken as how the reader wishes so that's good I think. :D I hope you get a good grade on it! :#1:

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A life with love with have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. :rose:

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*Yuri-Nikko:iconYuri-Nikko: Mar 25, 2008, 8:22:43 AM
Thankies =] :heart:

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:floating: 今度は僕が君に羽をあげよう…
:flame: 今君だけのために 赤い火になる
*Yuri-Nikko:iconYuri-Nikko: Mar 25, 2008, 8:23:13 AM
Thank you~ I'm a dark poet apparently xD

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:floating: 今度は僕が君に羽をあげよう…
:flame: 今君だけのために 赤い火になる
*Ryosuke01:iconRyosuke01: Apr 30, 2008, 10:12:57 AM
Sweet poem dude =D

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*Yuri-Nikko:iconYuri-Nikko: May 1, 2008, 5:06:16 PM
thankieee I got good grade on it xD

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:floating: 今度は僕が君に羽をあげよう…
:flame: 今君だけのために 赤い火になる